ahahaha well i've been well into the hakuouki yaoiness, just that i generally steer clear of fanfics in general because there are just. so. many. bad ones. -_-;;; i feel like reading them would make my braincells commit suicide. luckily i took a chance with this one and wasn't disappointed! :D it's not my favorite couple (i'm still a big advocate for the greatly neglected souji x hijikata couple >3< --if you ever write a fic about them i will go mad with rejoice) but it comes a close second, especially after this fine read.^^
ahh well i suppose years of being a teacher/trainer have made its mark. xDD i don't even critique that way consciously anymore, i only realized when you pointed it out. LOL. well i'm glad you appreciated my feedback. ahh i haven't read the "be mine" fic yet. >3< got preoccupied trading on tinierme. do you have one? you strike me as 'the type'. lol.
also i was surprised to find out your slovakian? how on earth do you speak english so impeccably well?? granted, i'm half european, half asian, neither of which should render me exceptionally gifted in the english language but i did grow up attending international schools middle school onwards so i have an excuse. xD
what i love the most about your work i think is that the characters are not static. they grow and develop just like real people which is what makes it so relateable and realistic. most people just have this image of a certain character in their mind (usually heavily influenced by the way they're portrayed in the series they originate from) and don't venture beyond such one-dimensional personalities.
ALSO (omg will this ever stop? xD) it seems like we're alike in a way because you seem to let the story write itself and let the characters take you through the story rather than making everything fit into your own mindset. and that's why your work is good. also i have a weakness for red haired fiery personality type semes (in fact in a one-on-one i'm doing right now my original character is a red-haired ladies man type of guy (except he's into men xDD)whom i think you'd really enjoy. i just recently created an ex for him (souji >3<) who died of illness, sound familiar? xD)
i'd be honored if you decided to my comment on your website.^^
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Date: 2011-02-04 06:30 am (UTC)ahh well i suppose years of being a teacher/trainer have made its mark. xDD i don't even critique that way consciously anymore, i only realized when you pointed it out. LOL. well i'm glad you appreciated my feedback. ahh i haven't read the "be mine" fic yet. >3< got preoccupied trading on tinierme. do you have one? you strike me as 'the type'. lol.
also i was surprised to find out your slovakian? how on earth do you speak english so impeccably well?? granted, i'm half european, half asian, neither of which should render me exceptionally gifted in the english language but i did grow up attending international schools middle school onwards so i have an excuse. xD
what i love the most about your work i think is that the characters are not static. they grow and develop just like real people which is what makes it so relateable and realistic. most people just have this image of a certain character in their mind (usually heavily influenced by the way they're portrayed in the series they originate from) and don't venture beyond such one-dimensional personalities.
ALSO (omg will this ever stop? xD) it seems like we're alike in a way because you seem to let the story write itself and let the characters take you through the story rather than making everything fit into your own mindset. and that's why your work is good. also i have a weakness for red haired fiery personality type semes (in fact in a one-on-one i'm doing right now my original character is a red-haired ladies man type of guy (except he's into men xDD)whom i think you'd really enjoy. i just recently created an ex for him (souji >3<) who died of illness, sound familiar? xD)
i'd be honored if you decided to my comment on your website.^^
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