I really like the plot, this is the first Ichigo/Keigo fic Iread and I must say I was pleasantly surprised.
I liked the fact that both ichigo and keigo didn't leap into sex, and are also actually thinking about how they're gonna waltz out of the closet. It's rather refreshing!
Unfortunately there are a few problems with spelling and grammar (Maybe you should invest in a beta). But even then, your level of english is really impressive seeing as it's not your mother tongue (I'm assuming from your profile page)
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Date: 2008-10-20 11:50 am (UTC)I liked the fact that both ichigo and keigo didn't leap into sex, and are also actually thinking about how they're gonna waltz out of the closet. It's rather refreshing!
Unfortunately there are a few problems with spelling and grammar (Maybe you should invest in a beta). But even then, your level of english is really impressive seeing as it's not your mother tongue (I'm assuming from your profile page)
I can't wait to see how this goes! ^^