Really?! Wow! xD That's actually a big compliment, thank you! ^^
That's great that you mention that, it was actually the thought behind it. It was someting I noticed while I read your translation of Saitou route. Whenever he recieves an advice, Saitou starts reflecting why he recieved that kind of advice and what it says about him. At least, that was the impression I got and somehow it turned into this. I have hesitated about the scene, during one of my edits and considered removing it, because it seemed a bit too clueless, but in the end I let it be. I was too sorry to delete it, I had too much fun writing it. ^^
I'm starved for a Shinpachi insight and this is the result. ^^" I gave him and Sano actually pretty much room, considering they're the side-pairing. I think I put every Shinpachi developement that had been ever shown in the series into this fic. Gosh. I need a fandisk. I'm not entirely sure if I don't idolize Sano in this fic a bit, next to Shinpachi and Saitou. ^^" I guess I can't fight against my fangirl nature, heh. But then again, why should I, right? ~_^ The bishies need a little loving care.
Oh, thank you! I was so unsure about the spar scenes! I think most fanfics skip the part, because the authors aren't sure about the theory around it. Can't say I'm any better. v_v Few hours of Kendo practice with former boyfriend just doesn't meassure up to guys like Saitou and Shinpachi. But I wanted to try writing something like this and see what came out of it, so I'm glad you like it! ^_^
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Date: 2013-02-16 06:08 pm (UTC)That's actually a big compliment, thank you! ^^
That's great that you mention that, it was actually the thought behind it. It was someting I noticed while I read your translation of Saitou route. Whenever he recieves an advice, Saitou starts reflecting why he recieved that kind of advice and what it says about him. At least, that was the impression I got and somehow it turned into this. I have hesitated about the scene, during one of my edits and considered removing it, because it seemed a bit too clueless, but in the end I let it be. I was too sorry to delete it, I had too much fun writing it. ^^
I'm starved for a Shinpachi insight and this is the result. ^^" I gave him and Sano actually pretty much room, considering they're the side-pairing. I think I put every Shinpachi developement that had been ever shown in the series into this fic. Gosh. I need a fandisk.
I'm not entirely sure if I don't idolize Sano in this fic a bit, next to Shinpachi and Saitou. ^^" I guess I can't fight against my fangirl nature, heh. But then again, why should I, right? ~_^ The bishies need a little loving care.
Oh, thank you!
I was so unsure about the spar scenes!
I think most fanfics skip the part, because the authors aren't sure about the theory around it. Can't say I'm any better. v_v Few hours of Kendo practice with former boyfriend just doesn't meassure up to guys like Saitou and Shinpachi. But I wanted to try writing something like this and see what came out of it, so I'm glad you like it! ^_^